Ka Seven

It was a particularly chilly day, much due to the sun being blocked out by the plumes of smoke; Ann Stark was lost in her thoughts. She was thinking of ...

I Am the Damned Serenity… Absolute stillness of all concerning matter. This perfect arrest of movement was conceived in a portion of a second, a very crucial second, in which ...

In order to ever define abortion as murder, you would have to first define murder. Assuming all of our definitions of murder on this forum is the taking of life, ...

Serenity… Absolute stillness of all concerning matter. This perfect arrest of movement was conceived in a portion of a second, a very crucial second, in which an obvious mistake was ...

Yeah we'll leave debate out of this. Thanks for the suggestions and compliments everyone! :D

This was an interesting poem. It captured me and kept me. very good... The only thing is that when you use enjambment, the subject matter after the period needs to ...

Serenity… Absolute stillness of all concerning matter. This perfect arrest of movement was conceived in a portion of a second, a very crucial second, in which an obvious mistake was ...

Thanks for all your suggestions. I came up with the quote. And if I need to get my head out of the sand because I have an opinion I find ...

I think this poem needs more subtlety and metaphores

Unless you do it a lot, wear camouflage, and recieve pay from your government, murder is illegal. -Tom

It had appeal. It's very unique. and I think what captured me is the title fit so well. A moment of healing is all healing ever is. And the "I ...

Very subtle. I like how you don't come right out and say what you're talking about, but it shows through the feelings you portray in the words and almost frantic ...

There were quite a few grammatical errors. "off" is spelled as such, you spelled it "of." You should go read through it, because you missed some "S's" that are needed ...

We always have thinking to do... As for the last response, I understand where you're coming from, and I used to believe the same. I know that it's appealing. the ...

6:00 AM, and I wake up to the incessant blaring noise coming from the speakers on my alarm clock. I roll over and slam my palm down on its top ...